The dusty chaos of Mufasa's death reflects the creeping, unforeboded affect death has on those around it. The monolithic stampede of wildebeests pours confusion into death's arrival. With all the color being either a shade of brown or gray, the blurred setting prepares the stage for a dramatic reception of death. Violin bows cry out in a sprinting song over the rumbling parade of dust to yank on despairing hope. The sparing flashes of characters faces allow for a brief show of frightened emotion; they portray the adrenaline-coated desperation to escape death. As Mufasa disappears into the obfuscated ruble, a feeling of hopelessness sets in. Even Simba's optimistic first pleas for his dad to wake up have the unwanted knowledge that death has already taken over. Simba's cracky voice as he holds back tears expresses the universal want to deny death, to undo it. His shaky cry for help, "Somebody, anybody, help" is the archetype for the desperation in death.
claim-3 Your claim is strong and obvious. good job.
ReplyDeletesupport-3- You support very well.
discussion-2 - You don't have very many quotes and i think you could use more. But the quotes you do use are strong.
Language Style-3- I like how you wrote "violin bows cry out in a sprinting song". that was really moving. I think your language style was the strongest part of your analysis